Hmm...... 1st, I must admit that I'm not interested on this topic!!
So if you get bored,reading this....it's not my fault.
here it goes......
Plastic surgeries are very common in the modern world. Because,lots of people seems to pay much attention on how do they look! Plastic surgeries are really helpful for those who have medical problems such as skin cancers...... therefore they can use a Plastic surgery to remove the ugly patches on their skin after their treatments. But, in most cases,plastic surgeries were used for changing the appearance rather than the medical purposes.As an example...MJ is one of the most common.As I know,Plastic surgeries are done by replacing some part of your skin with some extracted skin from another place of you body.(think I'm correct)
In my opinion, in contrast there are 2 types of reasons for doing plastic surgery.
1."It's for Medical purposes......."
2."Just want to change my appearance!!"
So in conclusion I must say that, no.1 should be allowed and number 2.......................SHOULDN'T.!
because it may be a help for TERRORISM!!!!
(As we all know,cosmetic surgeries are very common among terrorists,as they want to hide their identity....)
And also the thought people making their faces different from day after day makes me sick!
so fellas, don't EVER think of doing a cosmetic surgery,unless it's essential.
and that's all folks!!
P.S
Garry......I think I've written enough!!
Friday, February 5, 2010
Plastic surgery
Posted by Mayukha at 7:50 PM
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6 comments:
ya he shouldnt hv....... good work and next tym do ur home work earliy without a rush and come to clz on tym......... hahahaaha lolzzzzz
hehe lOl nice article!!! :D
Hi Mayukha,
Started quite negatively, but a good little piece and your opinions are expressed quite strongly.
There are, however, a few small mistakes here that I think you could self correct if you thought about it.
this for example "I'm not interested on this topic" one of the words is wrong...which one?
And what's wrong here "lots of people seems" can you tell me or correct it?
Have a read through again and see if you can self correct your own errors, it's very good practice for essay writing later and an important life skill to be able to proofread properly. I've marked so many essays down purely because the author couldn't be bothered to check their own work.
Thanks for the article and keep it up, making small arrors (sic) is not a problem, I like the fact that you're trying.
Gary
But You seemed to know something.And the other thing is come to clz a bit early.
Yeah sure I will garry...... thanks.
I think the 1st word should be "interested in" and the 2nd shoul be, "lot of"
Thnks to you tharuka,pula and nirasha...I'll try my best to come on time...."just, hard to do..." lol
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